Interesting creature Kobe, half goblin was creative thinking! I enjoyed reading your writing, you always do a great job using describing words. Words like 'storming through the kingdom' which add suspense and drama to your storytelling.
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Interesting creature Kobe, half goblin was creative thinking! I enjoyed reading your writing, you always do a great job using describing words. Words like 'storming through the kingdom' which add suspense and drama to your storytelling.
ReplyDeleteI like how your goblin is half bull , and also how the hero luke stone slices his head off!
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